Time to start translating more songs. We were invited to a friend's home for Novruz (March 20th - meal starting promptly at 3pm to mark the new year). We enjoyed a fabulous meal with all the traditional elements and then had an impromptu concert at the piano. (I also gave a short kamancha performance.) We sang many xalq mahnısı such as Gubanın Ağ Alması, Laçın - and songs from movies, for example, Qəmgin Mahnı. It was great fun. So, I need to get busy with new song translations. I'm feeling nice and rested after a week's vacation in Beirut. Thank-you Lebanon!
Today's song - Xumar Oldum
Again, at first the song appears straightforward, but translation is not so simple. For instance, it sounds completely normal to say "Ay qız" in Azerbaijani, but it sounds completely stupid in English. And "xumar oldum" - surely this doesn't mean "hung over"?! So, what to do? Please share your comments on my rather loose translation.
Getdim, gördüm bulaqdadır,
Ay qız, mənə bax-bax.
Ceyran, mənə bax-bax,
Əlüzünü yumaqdadır,
Ay qiz, mənə bax-bax.
Ceyran, mənə bax-bax.
I went to the spring and saw that she was there,
Hey, look my way.
Darling, send a glance my way,
She was washing her hands and her face,
Hey, look my way.
Darling, send a glance my way.
Nəqərat:
Xumar oldum, xumar oldum,
Xumar oldum, xumar.
Kətan köynək nazik bədən,
Gördüm, bihal oldum, bihal oldum,
Xumar oldum, xumar.
I am languishing, languishing,
I am languishing.
I saw her slender waist in her linen chemise,
I was undone, undone,
I am bereft.
Getdim, gördüm, bağda yatıb,
Ceyran, mənə bax-bax.
Maral, mənə bax-bax,
Qara tellər gülə batıb,
Gözəl, mənə bax-bax.
Ceyran, mənə bax-bax.
I went and saw her sleeping in the garden,
Darling, look my way.
My dear, cast a glance my way,
A flower is drowning in the dark fringe of your hair,
My beautiful one, look my way,
Darling, cast a glance my way.
Today's song - Xumar Oldum
Again, at first the song appears straightforward, but translation is not so simple. For instance, it sounds completely normal to say "Ay qız" in Azerbaijani, but it sounds completely stupid in English. And "xumar oldum" - surely this doesn't mean "hung over"?! So, what to do? Please share your comments on my rather loose translation.
Getdim, gördüm bulaqdadır,
Ay qız, mənə bax-bax.
Ceyran, mənə bax-bax,
Əlüzünü yumaqdadır,
Ay qiz, mənə bax-bax.
Ceyran, mənə bax-bax.
I went to the spring and saw that she was there,
Hey, look my way.
Darling, send a glance my way,
She was washing her hands and her face,
Hey, look my way.
Darling, send a glance my way.
Nəqərat:
Xumar oldum, xumar oldum,
Xumar oldum, xumar.
Kətan köynək nazik bədən,
Gördüm, bihal oldum, bihal oldum,
Xumar oldum, xumar.
I am languishing, languishing,
I am languishing.
I saw her slender waist in her linen chemise,
I was undone, undone,
I am bereft.
Getdim, gördüm, bağda yatıb,
Ceyran, mənə bax-bax.
Maral, mənə bax-bax,
Qara tellər gülə batıb,
Gözəl, mənə bax-bax.
Ceyran, mənə bax-bax.
I went and saw her sleeping in the garden,
Darling, look my way.
My dear, cast a glance my way,
A flower is drowning in the dark fringe of your hair,
My beautiful one, look my way,
Darling, cast a glance my way.